https://campfloggnaw.com/
Camp Flog Gnaw is a very popular music festival for young adults, presented by the rapper Tyler, the Creator. Seeing that the carnival is well known, it is ironic to see the hierarchy rhythm imperfections it has going on. The logo and color palette are nice however the height and weight of the text are sort of chaotic. The larger sized type is to show mainstream artists, most likely to grab potential festival goers attention. However, in my opinion, it just looks slapped in the middle of the body. The body is very disproportionate as well due to this.
Something I would do differently is order the artists name from mainstream to least known. This would create a large to small type setting which would make the lineup more cohesive. Another thing I would do differently, is have the same word count for each line. This would help the lineup to look more organized.
Overall, this poster is not bad but it could definitely use some improvement. It seems to me the only clear hierarchy element that was used was incorporating larger text for importance. There was some slacking on every other element, making it look un-unified. With some adjustments, Camp Flog Gnaw’s lineup can look more organized and thought out.
Typography Fall 19 